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Group 9

Word Assignment:  raw

TOP STORIES / TOP 5 WRITERS:

If **FINALIST** is listed next to the name, it means that the writer has advanced to the finals taking place on Wednesday, June 10th, starting at 7PM EST.  All finalists will receive an e-mail within 24 hours with further details.  Good luck!

#1 **FINALIST** - "Raw," was the giggling response for how the fish should be prepared. She never seemed to understand: We serve sushi. It all comes that way. CREATED BY Brian Colligan (9)

#2 **FINALIST** - “Eat your raw vegetables or the aliens will abduct you.” Peter squeezed his lips shut. A shadow fell over the yard and the roof split open. CREATED BY Kimberly Wisneski (9)

#3 - The raw edge of her skirt hung limp with manure from Farmer Jo’s place, dust from under the last pew at St. John’s, and Max Farrow’s blood. CREATED BY Kimberly Wisneski (9)

#4 **FINALIST** - Brow wet, palms raw, he spat an oozing wad of tobacco and dug in for the full-count pitch. They said he'd never make it out of the minors. CREATED BY Peter Hejny (9)

#5 **FINALIST** - In the living room, in the raw, I drank my coffee with a straw. Saw the neighbor outside wave. An accidental peep show I just gave. CREATED BY Fauci Tai (9)

#6 - She was raw and tender, and when they made love she cried from the pain. But she let him go on, so glad to no longer be a he. CREATED BY Peter Hejny (9)

#7 **FINALIST** - She sang. He heard. They met and loved. He cheated. She knew. He left. She raged. Bloody palms rubbed raw as she waited to surrender. CREATED BY Dia Hancock (9)
 

TOP 15 STORIES:

A new day begins,
Raw, but with promise and hope
Until darkness falls.
CREATED BY Gail Fowler (9)

"Raw," was the giggling response for how the fish should be prepared. She never seemed to understand: We serve sushi. It all comes that way. CREATED BY Brian Colligan (9)

“Eat your raw vegetables or the aliens will abduct you.” Peter squeezed his lips shut. A shadow fell over the yard and the roof split open. CREATED BY Kimberly Wisneski (9)

Brow wet, palms raw, he spat an oozing wad of tobacco and dug in for the full-count pitch. They said he'd never make it out of the minors. CREATED BY Peter Hejny (9)

Embracing the microphone, her soul’s raw essence burned with unrequited passion as she realized her 12 years on the stage would soon end. CREATED BY Luke Wilson (9)

He traveled down the dark passage. Wet and raw with an unsure end he cont’d. Without warning he was pushed into bright light. It’s a Boy. CREATED BY Dia Hancock (9)

In the living room, in the raw, I drank my coffee with a straw. Saw the neighbor outside wave. An accidental peep show I just gave. CREATED BY Fauci Tai (9)

Lion says "Roar... I'm the law."Puts his paw on the gazelle's core. (That feels sore.)Watch him gnaw.More & maw.He will eat his dinner raw. CREATED BY Elyse Hilton (9)

Puddles of pink led to the bathroom. Ed was hovering over the toilet. He asked me how this happened. Raw fish and beer do not a friend make. CREATED BY Adam Smith (9)

Raw steak on counter, ready for pan. Until its encounter with my dog, Stan. Jumped on the counter, ate the steak. I left it out, my mistake. CREATED BY Fauci Tai (9)

She sang. He heard. They met and loved. He cheated. She knew. He left. She raged. Bloody palms rubbed raw as she waited to surrender. CREATED BY Dia Hancock (9)

She was raw and tender, and when they made love she cried from the pain. But she let him go on, so glad to no longer be a he. CREATED BY Peter Hejny (9)

The raw edge of her skirt hung limp with manure from Farmer Jo’s place, dust from under the last pew at St. John’s, and Max Farrow’s blood. CREATED BY Kimberly Wisneski (9)

There was an introduction; she said she liked it raw. A few days later, and a lesson learned, he visited the doctor to treat his burn. CREATED BY Dia Hancock (9)

This land yields no joy. My voice, unpracticed, is raw now. If I cannot curl back into childhood, nor safety, nor home—no song until then. CREATED BY Chantal James (9)
 

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