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Group 11

Word Assignment:  dive

TOP STORIES / TOP 5 WRITERS:

If **FINALIST** is listed next to the name, it means that the writer has advanced to the finals taking place on Wednesday, June 10th, starting at 7PM EST.  All finalists will receive an e-mail within 24 hours with further details.  Good luck!

#1 **FINALIST** - I dive in for the kill; the knife plunges into his heart. The search for my mother's killer is over. Now he can't name me his accomplice. CREATED BY Vanessa Muri (11)

#2 **FINALIST** - From her office window, she watches a bird suddenly pull out of a dive and return to its perch. She sighs, knowing how it feels. CREATED BY Elise Brand (11)

#3 - They dive into the water hand-in-hand but lose each other beneath the surface. He searches for her blindly. She swims faster, deeper…away. CREATED BY Elise Brand (11)

#4 **FINALIST** - I hear it coming before I see it. I duck, I dive, I am too late. The red rubber ball hits my face and I fall. Another dodge ball casualty. CREATED BY Pauff Sara (11)

#5 **FINALIST** - Last week, at a small wedding, I winced as I watched only two women dive for the bouquet. One was my girlfriend and the other my lover CREATED BY Samuel Briggson (11)

#6 **FINALIST** - “Says here that eagles can soar, swoop, dive and perform unbelievable maneuvers while mating.” “Look, I had a very hard day.” “Just saying.” CREATED BY Rhea Richmond (11)
 

TOP 15 STORIES:

"A dive?" The girl said. "What could happen," she realized was only the worst, as the shark's great maw opened to receive her whole. CREATED BY Timothy Foster (11)

"Dive. Her body is down there." He hadn't lied...had no reason to. He was caught and the least he could do was put a family's mind at ease. CREATED BY R. Patrick Alberty (11)

“Says here that eagles can soar, swoop, dive and perform unbelievable maneuvers while mating.”
“Look, I had a very hard day.”
“Just saying.” CREATED BY Rhea Richmond (11)

From her office window, she watches a bird suddenly pull out of a dive and return to its perch. She sighs, knowing how it feels. CREATED BY Elise Brand (11)

He was told to take a dive. But his heart just wasn't into it. Slowly he stood, gritting his teeth to face the crowd. CREATED BY R. Patrick Alberty (11)

I dive in for the kill; the knife plunges into his heart. The search for my mother's killer is over. Now he can't name me his accomplice. CREATED BY Vanessa Muri (11)

I hear it coming before I see it. I duck, I dive, I am too late. The red rubber ball hits my face and I fall. Another dodge ball casualty.  CREATED BY Pauff Sara (11)

I ran by but it cried out “Please! I’m here! Luscious …rich…decadent! U deserve me! Dive right in!” Ate 2. Diet ruined. F-ing French bakery. CREATED BY Jane-Anne Mennella (11)

Last week, at a small wedding, I winced as I watched only two women dive for the bouquet. One was my girlfriend and the other my lover CREATED BY Samuel Briggson (11)

Seagulls circle the trash barges. They dive, take bits of things unwanted, like me, a half-eaten tuna fish sandwich. I am pecked to death. CREATED BY Pauff Sara (11)

She couldn’t swim. Her screams gave me chills. My conscience made me want to dive in and save her, but then she’d know I pushed her in. CREATED BY Joseph Lawson (11)

Sometimes good people die. This is part of writing. Let them dive death with dignity. You can always cannibalize them for later poems. CREATED BY Justin Kelly (11)

The day trader's dive from the fifth floor closely matched the recent trend of his stocks; a big drop, a brief rebound and then a flat line. CREATED BY Samuel Briggson (11)

They dive into the water hand-in-hand but lose each other beneath the surface. He searches for her blindly. She swims faster, deeper…away. CREATED BY Elise Brand (11)

What a dive - you call this a date? He looked at her. He'd lost a best friend over this? In the bathroom, he calls her ex, just says,"Dude." CREATED BY Rachel Carey (11)
 

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