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Group 17

Word Assignment:  hole

 

TOP STORIES / TOP 5 WRITERS:

If **FINALIST** is listed next to the name, it means that the writer has advanced to the finals taking place on Wednesday, June 10th, starting at 7PM EST.  All finalists will receive an e-mail within 24 hours with further details.  Good luck!

 

#1 **FINALIST** - The hole wasn’t always there. My father made it. He was aiming at me. He was drunk. From then on. Now we can pass dishes through the wall. CREATED BY Chelsea Werner (17)


#2 - Dresser and hamper—gone. The ugly lamp—finally gone. Not empty. Devoid of woman. Except the ring. Its center—the biggest hole in the room. CREATED BY Chelsea Werner (17)


#3 - Hole n. 1. A hole in her womb: pit, depression. 2. Informal He’s in the hole: cell, keep. 3. Slang He forced it in her hole: vagina, anus. CREATED BY Chelsea Werner (17)


#4 **FINALIST** - “I think she’s still breathin’.” “Don’t pay ‘er no mind.” “I think she’s lookin’ at me"" “Don’t mind ‘er. Just fill the damned hole.” CREATED BY Anthony Baker (17)


#5 - “Fucking hole,” Sam grumbled as he poked his greasy finger through the cigarette burn in his shirt. “Another shitty interview,” he muttered. CREATED BY Anthony Baker (17)


#6 - Jon hated his apartment. It wasn’t the mice or the rusty-faucet drips. It was the hole in the bedroom wall that seemed to look through him. CREATED BY Anthony Baker (17)


#7 **FINALIST** - From the hole in her daughter’s sock appeared the most beautiful toe, wriggling, searching the frayed world it found there. CREATED BY Angela Drew (17)


#8 **FINALIST** - She has a hole in her tights. A HOLE I ask you. And her glasses are dirty. No thanks, next please. CREATED BY Jen Wight (17)


#9 **FINALIST** - "A hole in my heart where once you were", he sobbed. She regarded him consideringly. "Um...Still here, jackass. Now wondering why...". CREATED BY Steve Belden (17)
 

 

TOP 15 STORIES:

"A hole in my heart where once you were", he sobbed. She regarded him consideringly. "Um...Still here, jackass. Now wondering why...". CREATED BY Steve Belden (17)


"A very Spanishy-type hole you’ve got there”, he winked. “Catalan, twit”, she replied, "And it's an olive pit". "Lucky me", he smiled. CREATED BY Steve Belden (17)


"Nice hole. Whatcha gonna do with it?"
"Fill it."
"What with?".
"Whatcha got?"
"Dirt. Mostly".
"Not as enticing as you'd think". CREATED BY Steve Belden (17)


“Fucking hole,” Sam grumbled as he poked his greasy finger through the cigarette burn in his shirt. “Another shitty interview,” he muttered. CREATED BY Anthony Baker (17)


“I think she’s still breathin’.”
“Don’t pay ‘er no mind.”
“I think she’s lookin’ at me"
“Don’t mind ‘er. Just fill the damned hole.”
CREATED BY Anthony Baker (17)


A writer sweating heart pounding fingers bleeding furiously digs a hole sized for a body when he discovers what he had been missing, a comma CREATED BY Philip Gilley (17)


AJ stuck his finger in the hole of a soda can and got cut. While looking for a bandage he slipped in a hole. The soda can fell on his head. CREATED BY David Loveless (17)


Dresser and hamper—gone. The ugly lamp—finally gone. Not empty. Devoid of woman. Except the ring. Its center—the biggest hole in the room. CREATED BY Chelsea Werner (17)


From the hole in her daughter’s sock appeared the most beautiful toe, wriggling, searching the frayed world it found there. CREATED BY Angela Drew (17)


Hole n. 1. A hole in her womb: pit, depression. 2. Informal He’s in the hole: cell, keep. 3. Slang He forced it in her hole: vagina, anus.
CREATED BY Chelsea Werner (17)


Jon hated his apartment. It wasn’t the mice or the rusty-faucet drips. It was the hole in the bedroom wall that seemed to look through him. CREATED BY Anthony Baker (17)


Mom:Honey, did you leave your tooth for the tooth fairy Girl:So many I put them in a hole outside Mom:Why Grandparents: Where’s our teeth CREATED BY Philip Gilley (17)


She has a hole in her tights. A HOLE I ask you. And her glasses are dirty. No thanks, next please. CREATED BY Jen Wight (17)


The hole wasn’t always there. My father made it. He was aiming at me. He was drunk. From then on. Now we can pass dishes through the wall. CREATED BY Chelsea Werner (17)


Two boys look down a hole.
You gonna do it?
Maybe, you?
If you do.
The boy jumps, the other one watches, then slowly walks away.
Sucker. CREATED BY John O'Neal (17)
 

 

GROUP PARTICIPANTS:

Group Last Name First Name City State / Province Country
17 Anderson K. G. Seattle WA USA
17 Baker Anthony Altamonte Springs FL United States
17 Beaumont John Gilbert Arizona USA
17 Belden Steve Ninilchik AK USA
17 Bridgett Michael Austin TX Travis
17 Delgado Kelly Modesto CA USA
17 Drew Angela San Francisco CA USA
17 Friedeck Tammy Greensboro NC USA
17 Gilley Philip Santa barbara Ca Usa
17 Goggin Paul Denver CO 80246
17 Goode Michelle Dunstable Bedfordshire England
17 granville helen san jose ca united states of america
17 Gustafson Emily Greensboro NC USA
17 head ruston tampa florida usa
17 Honor Naari Smyrna Ga United States
17 Lofgren Alyssa Van Nuys CA USA
17 Loveless David FPO AP USA
17 MacDougall John Port Hope ON CA
17 Mercer Glenn Atco NJ United States
17 O'Neal John Crested Butte CO USA
17 Peak Tricia Dover Kent UK
17 Sims Knight Cassandra Foxborough MA United States
17 Werner Chelsea Seattle WA usa
17 Wesley Neroli Melbourne Victoria Australia
17 Wight Jen Sydney NSW Australia

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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